题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,记述上周六你和父母去地坛公园认养树木的过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
【答案】
One possible version:
On Friday evening, I was watching TV with my parents when a piece of news caught our attention. The park called on people to adopt trees. That was exactly what we had been thinking about. So the next morning, we went to the park. A worker there gave us a detailed introduction and showed us to the pine woods. We chose a beautiful pine tree and the worker tied an adoption card on it. Seeing my name on the card, I was so proud and felt responsibility at the same time. To memorize this exciting moment, we took photos with our new family member---the pine tree. In the photo, we all smiled from bottom of our heart.
【解析】
试题分析:分析要求可知,根据四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,记述上周六你和父母去地坛公园认养树木的过程。短文应该用一般过去时,第一人称和第三人称。要求写约60个词,不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式,注意句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如:called on people to adopt 、Seeing引导的非谓语结构、what引导的表语从句等都很不错。