题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,今年的中国国际旅游节下个月将在你们城市举行,组委会拟招聘一些高中生担任英语导游,你打算应聘。请根据下列内容要点给组委会写一封申请信。
1.自我介绍(年龄、性别等);
2.英语水平(口语表达能力等);
3.特殊优势(相关经历、对当地旅游景点的了解、沟通能力等);
4.你的承诺。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m very glad to know that China International Tourism Festival will be held in our city next month. I’m writing to apply for an English tour guide for the festival.
My name is Li Hua. I’m a boy of 17, a Senior 2 student in a high school. I believe I am gualified for the job. Here are my qualifications. First of all, speaking a so fluent English will help me have no trouble in communicating with foreign tourists. Secondly, I’m fond of traveling and I’ve worked as an English tour guide at several great festivals in our city before, which allows me to be experienced. Most importantly, I know our local tourist spots so well that I am more equal to the job than others. At the same time, I have a good command of communicating.
I promise I’ll try to offer my best services to the travelers from all over the world. I would be very happy if I could be chosen as a tour guide.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】本题的考点为应聘求职信,主要结构是:
1) 说明写作目的。表明想要获得什么工作职位,介绍自己,为什么写信,可以用一句话概括。
2) 介绍相关工作经历及本人优势,以表明你可以胜任这个职位。包括教育背景、工作经历、个人能力及成就等。还可根据情况简单介绍个人爱好和兴趣。
注意:所有这些内容均应与应聘工作有关系。介绍背景时,选词遣字既不过分渲染,又不过分谦虚。要给人留下既充满信心又态度诚恳的印象。
3) 表示感谢和期待,恳请招聘单位对自己的申请给予优先考虑,作出必要的承诺并对对方表示感谢。
注意:因为求职信是在请求别人考虑你的申请,考虑给你机会,所以礼貌语气是必要的,也是重要的。
【本文亮点】本文在介绍自己相关经历及本人优势的时候,简单句、并列句、复合句交错使用,增强了文章的可读性。另外,first of all , secondly, most importantly, at the same time等等的使用,使得层次分明,结构紧凑。