Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As the saying go, treat others as you would like to be treated. If we want to be treated well, and we should treat others well too.

Two years before, I was admitted to a high school. I felt proudly and superior. Therefore, I always looked down upon my classmates who turned for me in their studies. One day, Tom asked me help him work out a math problem. I glanced at it and said, “So easy. What foolish you are!” On hear it, he said angrily, ”I won’t ask you again.” I was shocking. Only then did I realized why I was so unpopular with my classmates. From then on, I tried to treat them equally and helped them with all my heart.

Answer 1

【答案】1.go-goes

2.去掉and

3.before-ago

4.proudly-proud

5.for-to

6.help前加to

7.What-How

8.hear-hearing

9.Shocking-shocked

10.realized-realize

【解析】1.go-goes

考查主谓一致。”As the saying go,…”go的逻辑主语是the saying,，是单数，故谓语动词要用单数。故go 要改为goes。

2.去掉and。

考查连词。“If we want to be treated well, and we should treat others well too”本句中已有连词If引导的条件状语从句，所以不能再用连词and，故要去掉and。

3.before-ago

考查时间状语。根据句意：两年前，我被一所中学录取了。两年前应是Two years ago。故要把before改为ago。

4.proudly-proud

考查形容词作表语。“. I felt proudly and superior”中Feel 是系动词，要用形容词作表语。故要把proudly 改为proud。

5.for-to

考查固定搭配。“I always looked down upon my classmates who turned for me in their studies.”我总是瞧不起那些在学业上向我寻求帮助的同学。turn to 转向; （使）变成; 求助于; 翻书到。故要把for 改为to。

6.help前加to

考查固定搭配。Ask somebody to do something.。所以在“Tom asked me help him work out a math problem.”中help前缺了一个to。

7.What-How

考查感叹句。“What foolish you are!”感叹句中what 修饰名词，而foolish是形容词，所以要用how来修饰，故要把what 改为How。

8.hear-hearing

考查固定用法。On doing sth,一……就……。故“On hear it, he said angrily,”本句的hear,要加ing 形式。

9.Shocking-shocked

考查动词辨析。” I was shocking.本句中的主语是人，修饰人的要用动词的过去分词，而动词的ing形式是修饰物的。故要把shocking 改为shocked.