题目内容
书面表达(满分25分)
假如你是李华,在上一周去英国参加了由Fiona的学校组织的两校学生交流活动,在英国期间,你居住在Fiona的家中。回国后,请你给Fiona写封感谢信,内容包括:
1. 交流活动中的收获和感受
2. 回忆在Fiona家度过的美好日子
3. 感谢她送你的英文图书
注意:1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3. 开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)
提示词汇:文化交流活动:Cultural Exchange activity
Dear Fiona,
I’ve been back home safely from England.
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Yours,
Dear Fiona,
I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.
Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange activity. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.
What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together.
Here I especially thank you for the book you offered me as a gift. It’s a great help for me to learn about your country. I will treasure and make full use of it.
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for your!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查提纲类书面表达:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语stay in 呆在某处;participated in参加;have a better understanding of对。。有更好的理解;What’s more而且;make full use of充分利用;We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.这个句子which代指上面这件事,引导非限制性定语从句;And I’ll never forget the days we spent together这个句子中we spent together做the days的定语从句;It’s a great help for me to learn about your country这个句子it 做形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式;
考点: 提纲类作文