题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校外教Mary回美国度假即将返回,给你发来e-mail,询问你希望她帮你从美国带什么礼物。请给她回复—封电子邮件。要点如下:
1.询问度假情况;
2.希望得到什么礼物;
3.表达感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
I am so glad to know that you are returning to China after the holidays in the USA.
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
I am so glad to know that you are returning to China after the holidays in the USA. How is your holiday? You must have had great fun together with your family back in your motherland after working so long in China. I hope you can share your wonderful experiences with us afterwards.
It is very kind of you to offer to buy gifts for me. I would quite appreciate it if you could buy me an English dictionary and several popular novels which/that sell well in your country. I am sure they will help me improve my English. I will also prepare a gift for you in return.
Thanks again for your kindness, we are all looking forward to seeing you soon. Welcome back to our school!
Best wishes.
【解析】
这篇书面表达是一封电子邮件。假定你是李华,你校外教Mary回美国度假即将返回,给你发来e-mail,询问你希望她帮你从美国带什么礼物。请给她回复—封电子邮件。
假定你是李华,你校外教Mary回美国度假即将返回,给你发来e-mail,询问你希望她帮你从美国带什么礼物。请给她回复—封电子邮件。要点如下:1.询问度假情况;2.希望得到什么礼物;3.表达感谢。分析可知,应该以第一人称为主,一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出,要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展,考生要先想好写哪几点,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。