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上周末你与同学一起爬西山。请你根据以下要点,写一篇游记。

1. 早上在校门口集合,8:00乘车出发,一小时后到达山脚。

2. 爬上山顶,欣赏美景。

3. 在山顶上唱歌,跳舞,下棋,玩得很开心。

4.午餐后下山,下午3点到家。

5. 简单谈下你对此活动的感受。

要求: 1. 可适当增加细节

2. 字数120词

参考词汇:the West Mountain 西山

 

 

 

 

Last weekend,. I climbed the West Mountain with my classmates. All of us gathered at the gate of our school early in the morning, and then we set off by bus at 8:00 a.m. We were singing and chatting all the way, and reached the foot of the mountain an hour later.

The moment we arrived at the destination, we began to climb in high spirits. Soon we got to the top of the mountain. How beautiful it was when we looked at the view from the top! We sang, danced, played chess, and had the pictures taken on the top of the mountain. How happy we were! We went down the mountain after having lunch and arrived home at 3:00 p.m, tired but happy.

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time !

【解析】

试题分析:本题给出大量的信息,包括活动时间、集合时间、出发时间以及返回时间;集合地点、活动地点;活动内容等,注意将这些内容介绍清楚。写作中注意用词准确,逻辑清楚,并注意句子的时态一般用过去式。写作中适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,、条理清楚,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】范文中用一些短语和句式,增加了文章的色彩,如How beautiful it was when we looked at the view from the top!用到感叹句式;Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us这个句子运用not only but also连接两个句子,第一个句子用部分倒装 ,使句子结构复杂化,多背诵范文。

考点: 提纲类作文

 

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