Question

基础写作（15分）

假如你是李华，请你使用5个句子就本校食堂服务(canteen service)的状况给校长写一封信。开头和结尾已为你写好。

内容包括：

优点	不足	建议
食堂干净	价格偏高	希望学校尽快解决问题
饭菜可口	种类偏少
服务态度好	等候时间较长

Dear Mr. Principal.

I am a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Principal,

I am a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.

In general, the service is satisfactory. The hall is clean and tidy and the dishes taste delicious as well. What's more, the workers there treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy.

However, we feel the price of the meals is a little too high, Besides, we can only have a limited variety of dishes with little change every week. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time is to us students. Therefore, may I suggest something be done to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?

Thanks for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语In general一般来说；What's more而且；In addition此外；You could understand how precious time is to us students.这个句子how引导understand的宾语从句；Therefore, may I suggest something be done to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school这个句子中suggest做建议讲，宾语从句用（should）do;

考点： 提纲类作文