Question

请你以一则公益广告——Don’t let the keyboard separate you and your loved ones为题写一篇发言稿，谈谈网络给我们带来的好处，并呼吁人们放下手中的鼠标与家人多多沟通，享受与家人在一起的美好时光。
参考词汇：网民—netizen
注意：1．词数：120左右；
2．题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
Don’t let the keyboard separate you and your loved ones
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Answer 1

Hello, everyone! Today the number of the netizens in our country has increased rapidly, yet many of them do not pay enough attention to the family. There’s no doubt that we benefit much from the Internet. For example, it’s convenient for us to get the information we need and communicate with our friends and relatives. Meanwhile, it can help us learn what is happening both at home and abroad. However, no matter how attractive the Internet is, we shouldn’t be separated from our loved ones. Therefore, just for a moment, we should stop surfing the Internet and spend time with our families, enjoying the time when we are together. So just remember this: don’t let the keyboard separate you and your loved ones.
Please take action! That’s all. Thank you!

试题分析：这是一份发言稿，但是只给了一个关于网络的话题，只有简单的要点，没有具体的内容，属于半开放性作文，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： pay enough attention to 注意，take action采取行动， There’s no doubt that we benefit much from the Internet. 这句话用了固定句型，it’s convenient for us to get the information we need and communicate with our friends and relatives. 这句话用了it做形式主语， it can help us learn what is happening both at home and abroad. 这句话用了宾语从句，However, no matter how attractive the Internet is, we shouldn’t be separated from our loved ones. 这句话用了让步状语从句，还有范文还使用了 Meanwhile, Therefore,这样的词使文章更加连贯。