Question

假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。
内容要点：
*表示歉意  
*理由：去机场接人  
*询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座
注意：
1. 词数：100左右  
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Miss Morgan,
I am so sorry                                                                                 
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                   
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Miss Morgan,
I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.
I am very much interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇提纲类书面表达。第一步：审题。分析题目和提纲可知，这封书信的体裁应该是议论文。论点是“家长用金钱，旅游等承诺鼓励孩子努力学习是不确当的”，陈述要点并说明理由。因文章需要发表自己的意见，故使用第一人称。第二步：构思。文章应该按照“总——分——总”的结构分为三段。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态。不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如so … that …，be able to， attend the lecture，promise to do, be interested in，if so，a great deal；还运用句型if、what引导的宾语从句。并注意了句子的衔接如：and，if so等等。