Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Charlie和家人将于暑假期间来中国旅游。请你给他写一封电子邮件，为他提供一些建议。

内容包括：

1.欢迎他和家人来中国旅行；

2.旅行前的准备：了解中国文化，学会用筷子，学一些筒单的汉语。

注意：1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总数）；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Charlie,

I’m delighted to know you are coming to China with your family during the summer holiday.

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I hope you will find my advice helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Charlie,

I’m delighted to know you are coming to China with your family during the summer holiday. It’s a good opportunity to experience Chinese culture. Now I’m writing to offer you some advice.

It is a good idea for you to make careful preparations before you travel to China. To begin with, you should know of some Chinese culture, which can help you behave properly during your stay. Secondly, you’d better learn how to use chopsticks so that you can taste different varieties of Chinese food. Last but not least, if you can speak some simple Chinese, it will be easy for you to communicate with locals wherever you go.

I hope you will find my advice helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：你的外国笔友Charlie和家人将于暑假期间来中国旅游。请你给他写一封电子邮件，为他提供一些建议。内容包括：1.欢迎他和家人来中国旅行；2.旅行前的准备：了解中国文化，学会用筷子，学一些筒单的汉语。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：a good opportunity to experience Chinese culture.（体验中国文化的机会）；make careful preparations（做出细心的准备）；taste different varieties of Chinese food.（品尝中国不同种类的食品）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。