Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的好友Peter前不久随父母去了英国，他写信告诉你他很不适应国外的校园生活，感到很孤独并希望你给出建议。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回封电子邮件。

1. 多交一些朋友；

2. 积极参加各种活动。

注意:

1.词数:100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇:adapt to适应。

Dear Peter,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear peter,

I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in England, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

First, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封邮件，建议信。

第一步：

审题: 邮件 建议信

人称：第一、二人称

时态： 一般现在时、一般将来时

2、结构： 总分法，分三部分，第一部分写信目的——提建议，第二部分说明具体的建议内容，第三部分希望建议对对方有帮助。

要点：

1. 说明写信目的——就对方的问题提建议

2．具体的建议

①努力学英语，增加与人交流的机会

②多交朋友，减少孤独感

③积极参加各种活动，丰富自己的生活

3．希望这些建议对对方有帮助，并希望对方接受

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）

have trouble (in) doing…..；adapt to； take one’s advice；work hard at；opportunity；communicate with；make friends；loneliness；take an active part in；make life interesting；find these ideas useful

第三步：连词成句

1.You are having trouble adapting to your new school life in England.

2.This situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

3.You should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.

4.Why not make some friends?

5.You can take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting.

6.I hope you will find these ideas useful.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： First of all; to begin/start with ,In the beginning

Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides , moreover , apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile , in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but , however, although , though , yet , while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as , therefore, As a result , as a consequence , consequently , thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。