Question

假如你是高一学生李华，最近你的初中同学张明进入高中后不适应高中生活，情绪低落，丧失信心。请你根据提示给他写一封e-mail，鼓励他努力学习，合理安排高中生活。
内容要点如下：
● 确定学习目标
● 改进学习方法
● 学会独立生活
● 参加课外活动
● 处理好同学关系
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节。
Dear Zhang Ming，
I’m sorry to hear that                                                           
　　　　　                    
Yours,
Li Hua   

Answer 1

 
Dear Zhang Ming
I’m sorry to hear that you are in a bad mood and almost lose your heart because you are not able to adapt to life in senior high. Don’t worry. The following are my suggestions.
First, it is important to set new goals in your study at the beginning of you school year. Besides, your learning method should be impoved. In addition, it is necessary to learn to live on your own and get along with your classmates. In your spare time, you’d better take an active part in various after-school activities.
I firmly hope I can be of some help to you and I believe you can make progress step by step.
Yours
LiHua

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