Question

假设你叫李津，现在在英国工作，你的朋友陈立写信告诉你他打算赴英留学，想知道初到英国可能会遇到的困难。请你用英语给他写一封回信，信的内容应包括：
1.可能会遇到的困难：语言方面的障碍、饮食的不习惯、想家、孤独等；
2.鼓励他并表示愿意帮助他。
注意：1.词数不少于l 00字。
2.信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Chen Li,
I’m glad to hear from you.You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK.
                                               
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin

Answer 1

Dear Chen Li,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK. Now, I’d like to tell you something about it.
First, you may have the problem about the language you think you are well prepared.You may find it difficult to communication with the natives, because many of them have a strong accent. Besides, you may not get used to the western food here or even hate to have it. What’s more, you may feel lonely and miss your family and friends, especially in the very beginning.
However, you needn’t worry about it. Several weeks later, you will get used to everything here and love the place, and I’ll also try my best to help you when necessary.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin

试题分析：题目要求给陈立写一封回信，告诉他赴英留学可能会遇到的困难。题目是常见的书信类作文，学生比较容易下笔。可以分成三部分，第一部分总写，第二部分重点分析会遇到的困难；第三部分提出帮助。注意书信的格式要正确；使用第一人称进行写作；正确使用标点符号，单词拼写要正确；注意不要出现时态、语法方面的错误。
【亮点说明】范文注意使用Now, First, Besides, What’s more, However, Several weeks later, and等来衔接上下文，使作文看起来很紧凑，并且很有条理；
范文使用了定语从句(that) you think you are well prepared；固定句型find it difficult to communication with the natives；原因状语从句because many of them have a strong accent；try my best to help you省略when (it is) necessary等重点语法知识，有较强的语法功底；
范文海使用了一些短语和固定搭配，如：get used to, hate to have it, I’d like to, feel lonely, in the very beginning, worry about等，使作文变得充实、生动。