Question

18．假定你叫李华，近期你校开展了一个名为"要经济还是要环境----我们必须做出抉择吗？"的辩论赛，结果如下表所示．请根据下表的内容写一篇150词左右的短文．开头已经给出，不计入总词数．

比例	大约40%的学生	大约60% 的学生
观点	削减生产来保护环境	经济发展对环境保护有利
原因	世界的大片区域已经受到工业污染的破坏，大量的动物都在死亡，人口越来越多．	很多工厂控制污染物的排放，投入资金修复所造成的破坏，充分利用循环材料．
发表自己的观点并具体说明，至少两点．

Recently a debate entitled"The economy or the environment---must we choose？"has been carried out in our school．The results are as follows．
About 40% of the students hold the opinion that                         

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
About 40% of the students hold the opinion that  we should cut back on the amount of things we produce to save the environment．
高分句型二：
As we all can see，large areas of the world are damaged by industrial waste．
句型一 opinion that  we should cut back on the amount of things we produce to save the environment 该句中that引导了一个同位语从句，that在从句中只起到引导作用，不作句子成分，同位的名词为opinion．
句型二 As we all can see，large areas of the world are damaged by industrial waste 该句是一个由as引导的非限制性定语从句，as在句子作宾语，替代后面整个主句的内容．
此外，该书面表达中还包含有以下重要短语和高级词汇：
as follows   如下     as a result 因此     on one hand…on the other hand  一方面，另一方面     the key to doing sth 做．．的关键
该书面表达中的重要句型部分的从句的使用和高级短语和词汇的使用，使得文章更层次分明，表述更加确切完整．

解答 Recently a debate entitled"The economy or the environment---must we choose？"has been carried out in our school．The results are as follows．（提出论点）
   About 40% of the students hold the opinion that  we should cut back on the amount of things we produce to save the environment．（高分句型一）As we all can see，large areas of the world are damaged by industrial waste．（高分句型二）As a result，many creatures are being wiped out．What's worse，there are more and more people living on the earth，making the problem more complicated． However，60% of the people think differently，saying that the development of economy is beneficial for environmental protection．On one hand，many factories control the amount of pollution they produce．At the same time，they invest money to repair the damage they've caused．On the other hand，they make the best of recycled materials to reduce pollution．（阐述理由）
   As for me，I do believe a stable economy and a healthy environment can be possible at the same time．Recycling is the key to helping both sides．More effective laws should be put in place so that those illegal businessmen cannot go unpunished．Let's work hand in hand to make this happen soon．（个人观点）

点评 该书面表达为图表类，通常都有一定的数据或者表格内容作为写作参考和依据．考生应细致观察图表内容，用准确的、简单明了的语言将图表内容表达清楚．另外，平时应注意积累相应短语和词汇，以使得行文有更多的亮点．