题目内容
13.目前,不少人在写作文或交流时喜欢使用网络语言.就此现象,你班最近举行了一场讨论.请根据下表的提示,客观地介绍讨论的情况及你的观点.40%的同学认为 | 60%的同学认为 | 你的观点 |
1.有点荒诞,有时让人无法理解; 2.违背了汉语的语法规则,对学习毫无帮助. | 1.幽默,使语言更生动; 2.有助于表达思想. | 1.… 2.… |
2.词数120左右.开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3.参考词汇:荒诞的 ridiculous
With the development of the Internet,there has come a kind of language called Web Language.Recently,our class has held a discussion on whether it's good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.
分析 亮点句型一:40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language,thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life.40%的学生不赞成使用网络语言,认为在日常生活中不常看到或听到的单词是荒谬的.这是一个复杂句,其中thinking it…in our daily life是主句的伴随状语,在这个状语中 which are not commonly used in our daily life引导的是定语从句修饰先行词words.
亮点句型二:They think what they say will sound humorous,which makes the language more lively.他们认为他们说的话听起来幽默,这使得语言更加生动.这是一个有主语从句和定语从句的句子.what they say will sound humorous是think的宾语从句,在这个宾语从句中what they say是主语从句;which makes the language more lively是一个非限制性定语从句,which指代前面整个句子的内容.
解答 With the development of the Internet,there has come a kind of language called Web Language.Recently,our class has held a discussion on whether it's good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.【阐明现象】
40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language,thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life(亮点句型一).Worse still,it's hard for them to make themselves understood.In their opinion,it is against Chinese grammar,and it's not beneficial to students'studies.
However,the rest of the students are fond of it.They think what they say will sound humorous,which makes the language more lively.Moreover,it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.【阐述同学们的观点】
In my opinion,it is a phenomenon worth thinking about.I don't think it good to use Web Language.It may be fashionable as some think,but you may also make your idea confusing,leaving other people at a loss.(亮点句型二)【个人观点】
点评 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

A. | others | B. | another | C. | the other | D. | other |
70%的同学的看法 | 靠自己打工来支付学费会影响学业; 现在把精力都用在学习上,将来报答父母的养育之恩; |
30%的同学的看法 | 通过打工可以获得工作经验,了解社会; 体会父母挣钱不易,从而戒掉乱花钱的坏习惯; |
你的看法 | … |
Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent.
Yours,
Li Hua.
比例 | 大约40%的学生 | 大约60% 的学生 |
观点 | 削减生产来保护环境 | 经济发展对环境保护有利 |
原因 | 世界的大片区域已经受到工业污染的破坏,大量的动物都在死亡,人口越来越多. | 很多工厂控制污染物的排放,投入资金修复所造成的破坏,充分利用循环材料. |
发表自己的观点并具体说明,至少两点. |
About 40% of the students hold the opinion that
部分同学的生活习惯 | 你的看法(不少于两点) |
乘坐私家车上学 | … |
乱扔垃圾 | |
不注意随手关灯,浪费电力资源;用水不节约,浪费水资源 |
1.发言稿必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥;2.发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;3.词数:100左右.
4.参考词汇:
Dear friends,
As we all know,we are damaging the environment.Therefore,it's very important for us to form low-carbon living habits_________________________________________________
That's all.Thank you!