题目内容
3.情景作文假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,你校于10月8日举行了50周年校庆活动.作为学校英语报刊的一名记者,请你根据下列信息为校报写一篇短文,报道此次活动的主要内容.
时间 | 10月8日 |
内容 | 上午:师生迎接校友; 校长致辞; 学生带校友参观校园. |
下午:师生与校友共同观看歌舞表演; 校友为学校赠书 |
2.词数不少于60.
分析 写好图表类作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的图表内容,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和图表之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态.根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当.语言力求准确、简洁.根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料.同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性.考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】范文中有不少词组和句型,如:A great number of 许多,as well as 和…,不但,而且…,show ….around带某人参观,be proud to do以…为荣,In the end,最后,our headmaster gave a speech about great changes in our school these years,which greatly impressed everyone.这句话有定语从句,Then some studentsed the retired teachers our beautiful campus.In the afternoon,a big party was held.We gave wonderful performances,singing and dancing.这句话用了现在分词做状语,
解答 On October 8th we celebrated our school's 50th anniversary.A great number of former students and retired teachers came to the celebration.
In the morning,teachers as well as students gave a warm welcome to the guests at the school gate.(高分句型) After that,our headmaster gave a speech about great changes in our school these years,which greatly impressed everyone.(高分句型)Then some students showed the retired teachers around our beautiful campus.In the afternoon,a big party was held.We gave wonderful performances,singing and dancing.All of us enjoyed it very much.In the end,some of the guests donated some books to our school.
Through this activity,I know more about our school and we're proud to be members of the big family.(高分句型)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
"90后"的缺点 | "90后"的优点 | 你自己的感受 |
1.依赖性强 2.自私 3.贪图过舒适的生活等 | 1.渴望了解周围的世界; 2.思想独立; 3.有很多新观念等 |
1.必须包括表格中的所有内容;
2.为了使文章通顺完整,可以适当增加内容;
3.词数:100-120左右.
We,post90's generation,are living in a society full of fiercer competition,and developing our special manners and values,which has raised people's concern.
It's true that the post90's generations have some weaknesses.Some of us,for example,rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives.Some are even selfish and care little for others.
At the same time,the post90's generations desire to learn more about the world around us,and we are independent in thinking.We always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas.
I think the post90's generation should carry forward our strong points and overcome the weaknesses,and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation.
40%的同学认为 | 60%的同学认为 | 你的观点 |
1.有点荒诞,有时让人无法理解; 2.违背了汉语的语法规则,对学习毫无帮助. | 1.幽默,使语言更生动; 2.有助于表达思想. | 1.… 2.… |
2.词数120左右.开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3.参考词汇:荒诞的 ridiculous
With the development of the Internet,there has come a kind of language called Web Language.Recently,our class has held a discussion on whether it's good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.
比例 | 大约40%的学生 | 大约60% 的学生 |
观点 | 削减生产来保护环境 | 经济发展对环境保护有利 |
原因 | 世界的大片区域已经受到工业污染的破坏,大量的动物都在死亡,人口越来越多. | 很多工厂控制污染物的排放,投入资金修复所造成的破坏,充分利用循环材料. |
发表自己的观点并具体说明,至少两点. |
About 40% of the students hold the opinion that