Question

假如你是李华，是某中学高三学生。拟合其他一些学生将前往澳大利亚进行交流活动，你被安排在Jones家寄宿。请你用英语向Jones写一封信，介绍自己的一些情况，要点如下：
1）自我介绍、家庭情况；2）告诉他们你的生活习惯；
3）你的心愿
注意：
1）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2）词数120--150左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总次数。
Dear Mr Jones,
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Jones,
My name is Jiang Ming, a senior 3 student from Shandong Province. There are four people in my family---my father, a postman, my mother, a nurse, my twin brother and me. We love each other and live a happy life.
I like pets, such as dogs, cats and so on, so it's OK for me if your family keeps some pets. I don't smoke but I don't mind if anybody smokes. Besides, I enjoy various foods, including pork, beef and mutton and I'm not particular about fooD.What's more, I'm in good health and don't take any medicine. I’m also a sports fan and take exercise outdoors.
I believe that I will have a good time during my stay in your home because I have been told that your family are friendly and kinD.I also believe that I can learn a lot about your culture and improve my English.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。你被安排在Jones家寄宿。请你用英语向Jones写一封信，介绍自己的一些情况，要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】I don't smoke but I don't mind if anybody smokes. 这句话用了宾语从句，I enjoy various foods, including pork, beef and mutton and I'm not particular about food.这句话有be particular about这个词组， I'm in good health and don't take any medicine. 这句话用了be in good health健康良好， I believe that I will have a good time during my stay in your home because I have been told that your family are friendly and kind.这句话有宾语从句，原因状语从句，文章还使用了一些关联词， Besides, What's more, 使文章更加连贯。