Question

一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英文稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
写作要点：
它是中国传统节日之一；
家人团聚；
赏月、吃月饼、
还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意：
词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；
开头语已您写好，不讲总词数。
参考词汇：
中秋节:the Mid-Autumn Festival             农历: lunar calendar
赏月: enjoy the full moon                  月饼: moon cake
The Mid- Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15^th of the eighth month of Our Chinese lunar calendar

Answer 1

The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices, such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

试题分析：本题是提纲类作文，文体是说明文。话题是中秋节，材料已给出，考生应该不难理解写作内容和写作目的，且文章的题目和首句已给出，关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
【亮点说明】As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration.这句话用了让步状语从句， What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. 这句话用了主语从句，With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. 这句话用了现在分词做伴随状语，In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices, such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.这句话用了in addition to除了，使文章更加连贯。