题目内容

假如你是李华,你的好友刘捷今年以较好的成绩考取了上海外国语大学,请你给她写封信,以分享她成功的快乐。内容应包括以下三个方面的内容:1.对她的成绩表示祝贺;2.肯定她付出的努力;3.决心向她学习,明年取得好的成绩。
注意:1.词数:120-150;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:上海外国语大学:Shanghai International Studies University

Dear Liu Jie,
Haven’t seen you for months! I am extremely happy to know that you have been admitted to Shanghai International Studies University!Congratulations!
There is no doubt that you have devoted a lot to your studies, for which I admire you much! I still remember you told me that if one wants to achieve success, her must have a plan first, and then, stick to it. I will do as you told me.
Now, it is my turn to realize my goal in the coming college entrance examination. I will try my best to work hard and I believe I can also get excellent results like you. Please wait for my good news. I won’t disappoint you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评:本文属于提纲类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
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[写作内容]1、 以约30个词概括这个感人的故事;
2、 以约120个词,请就“在受别人的帮助中,学会了帮助别人”的话题写一篇英语短文,
表达你内心的感受,并包括如下要点:
1)你看完这个故事后,你如何评价这位母亲的无私行为;
2)请以你的日常生活经历的事情为例,说明别人的善良行为对你的影响;
3)你的感想。
[写作要求]1、 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2、 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3、 标题自定。
[评分标准] 概括准确、语言规范、内容合适,篇章连贯。
假如你是李华,针对你市目前的交通拥堵问题,给市长写一封信,提出自己的建议。要点如下:
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2. 提出解决的办法,包括:1)政府鼓励人们使用公共交通并限制私家车;
2)修建更多的车道与停车场;
3)教育大众遵守交通规则;
3. 希望市长予以回复。
注意:1. 词数100—120;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇: lane n. 车道;  private car 私家车;  parking lot停车场
traffic jam交通堵塞;   public transport公共交通
Dear Mayor,
I’m writing to give some suggestions to improve our city’s transportation.
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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The next week, Sally got a letter from her mother saying “Thank you very much for your lovely presents, but why did you send me three black umbrellas?”
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2. 然后以约120个词写一篇短文,并包括如下要点:
(1) 所读故事对你的启发;
(2) 记叙一个与该故事中Sally或陌生人的行为相类似的故事;
(3) 你对亲人的感恩或对他人善心的感激。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 标题自定。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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