Question

【题目】假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他用英语写封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示歉意；

2.说明原因；

3.另约时间。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Bob,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the book store with you on Friday afternoon（要点1：点题致歉）. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting afternoon(要点2：说明原因). I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.（引申） Shall we go on Saturday morning? （要点3：另约时间） We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books（引申：另约，强调什么事）. If it is convenient for you, let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best.（增加细节，给出两种时间原则）I should be available any time after school next week.（亮明自己下周随时有空，可不能再延期致歉啦）

Yours,

Li Hua（结束语）

【解析】试题分析：本次作文要求假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件。要点包括：1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：宾语从句that I cannot go to the book store with you on Friday afternoon；that I have to attend an important class meeting afternoon；the change will not cause you too much trouble.和what time suits you best. If it is convenient for you句型。