题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the saying goes, chance favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.
I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.
From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.
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【解析】第一处:考察时态,由于这句话是谚语,谚语一般采用一般现在时,故要将favored改为favors.
第二处:考察名词单复数,one of the/形容词性物主代词后应该加可数名词复数,故要把experience后加s,变为experiences.
第三处:考察冠词,可数名词单数前要加冠词,且此处表示泛指,故要在member前加上冠词a.
第四处:考察非谓语动词,此句中出现了两个谓语动词,分别是decided和play, 所以需要把第二个动词变换成非谓语动词,且需跟在介词up之后,(介词后面的动词需用-ing形式),故要将play改为playing.
第五处:考察逻辑连词,but前的句意是“我最好的朋友不让我这么做”,but后的句意是“是我的懒惰还有准备不足才导致了失败”,前后并没有转折的意思,而是承接的关系,故要将but改为and.
第六处:考察强调句,it is/was…that…,故要将which改为that..
第七处:考察介词,介词on后应该接名词才可以构成状语,且every day本身相当于副词,可以单独 作状语,故要把on去掉.
第八处:考察副词,副词修饰形容词,形容词修饰名词,而形容词full后面不是名词,而是形容词,故要用副词来修饰,故要将full改为fully.
第九处:考察形容词,convincing让人确信的,主语是物,convinced感到确信的,主语是人,而此处主语是I,故要将convincing改为convinced.
第十处:考察代词一致,convince后引导的是一个完整的从句,从句的主语是we,故要将I改为we.