题目内容
【题目】假设你是李津,你的笔友Johnson给你写信咨询有关中国女排名将朱婷的信息,请你根据以下提示回信答复。
| 姓名 | 朱婷 | 国籍 | 中国 |
出生日期 | 1994年11月29日 | 出生地点 | 河南 | |
身高 | 1.95 m | 体重 | 78 kg | |
团队荣誉 | 2013 World Grand Prix (Silver Medal) | |||
2014 World Championship (Silver Medal) | ||||
2015 World Cup (Gold Medal) | ||||
个人荣誉 | Most Valuable Player (4次) | |||
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Johnson,
I am very glad that you want to know something about Zhu Ting. She was born on November 29, 1994, in Henan Province. She became interested in volleyball in the training school and showed a great talent for volleyball. Besides, she has a perfect body with 1.95 m in height and 78 kg in weight. As a result, she plays as an outside hitter for the team. Thanks to her gift, especially her efforts, she has made great progress and already been awarded “Most Valuable Player” four times. Meanwhile, with team spirit and cooperation, China women’s national volleyball team won two silver medals in 2013 and 2014, and a gold medal in 2015.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】试题分析:本文是一封书信。你的笔友Johnson给你写信咨询有关中国女排名将朱婷的信息,请你根据提示回信答复。写作时需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,切记要写好信的开头和结尾。二是要详略得当,本文应重点写朱婷的信息。三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
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本文是一封书信,格式正确,内容齐全,内容符合要求,文中使用高级句子。I am very glad that you want to know something about Zhu Ting.句中that引导宾语从句;另外句中使用很多高级词汇和短语,Besides, As a result, Thanks to,made great progress,Meanwhile,等,这使文章显得丰富多彩。