Question

2013年1月上旬，全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾，陷入大范围的重度和严重污染。造成这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，以“Let’s  do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80-100字的短文。
1.重要性：只有一个地球
2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难
3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇：
disaster n.灾难    
fog and haze（hazy weather）雾霾

Answer 1

It is reported that there has been constant hazy weather in seventeen provinces in January,2003, which has led to a large area of heavy pollution in China.  Air pollution is universally believed to have been caused by waste gas from the factory and transportation. And various diseases resulted from it.
As we all know , there is only one earth to live in .It is our home. With social development, more and more pollution ,disease and disaster are ahead of us. If we continue damage to it ,nature will turn on us. We might have a terrible ending .
So stop pollution right away. Let’ s do more planting and use more public transportation as much as possible. And more severe regulations should be made to punish enterprise that cause pollution. Only in this way can we have a better living environment.

解析试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。2013年1月上旬，全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾，陷入大范围的重度和严重污染。造成这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，以“Let’s  do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80-100字的短文。1.重要性：只有一个地球2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然.需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数80-100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】It is reported that there has been constant hazy weather in seventeen provinces in January,2003, which has led to a large area of heavy pollution in China. 这里含有一个主语从句和定语从句。Only in this way can we have a better living environment.这里使用了部分倒装。
考点：话题类书面表达