Question

如今很多中学生都纷纷开起了自己的博客, 请对这一现象进行简要介绍，并发表自己的看法。
注意：1. 词数：120左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 参考调汇：开博客open one’s blog
Nowadays, it’s not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet.
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Answer 1

One possible version
Nowadays, it’s not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. For one thing, it can provide a platform to show their talent and release their pressure, thus making it more and more popular with high school students. On the contrary, many parents and teachers think that managing one’s blog takes a lot of time and energy.
Personally speaking, I approve of the former opinion. Opening and organizing an eye-catching blog needs various abilities such as writing, designing, being skillful at computer and so on. Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful blog. As a consequence, we improve ourselves during the procedures of organizing our blogs.
Anyway, the blog itself is of little harm. It is your attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.

解析试题分析: 本文要求对如今的中学生开了自己的博客这一现象进行简要介绍，并发表自己的看法。两个方面的内容要求。然后确定人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。 时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。 
【亮点说明】文中使用了For one thing表明了开微博的好处，用On the contrary说明了其缺点。Personally speaking,开始表达自己的观点。注意了开头用词的变化。同时用了thus –ing表示顺理成章的理由；还用动词的-ing做主语等；还运用了Only加状语的倒装句结构等较复杂的句式。并注意了句子句子之间的衔接如用As a consequence，Anyway等等。
考点:提纲类作文。