Question

【题目】如今，随着生活条件的改善，越来越多的孩子开始发胖。最近，某校高一年级就”如何保持苗条身材”进行问卷调查，调查结果如下面饼状图（pie chart）所示。请据此用英语写一篇短文, 报道此次调查结果，并给出你的建议。

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1.词数：120左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

From our recent survey of students, we have found that____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】From our recent survey of students, we have found that the most popular way of keeping slim is doing exercise regularly, which 35 percent of the students prefer. This is followed by only eating vegetables, which 24 percent of the students are in favor of. About one fifth of the students think a balanced diet makes for a slim figure. However, a small number of students choose to go on a diet or take weight-loss pills (/choose other ways, such as going on a diet or taking weight-loss pills), which is harmful to their health.

We want to help the students (to) keep slim in a healthy way. For this reason, we suggest that our school organize various sports activities to encourage more students to work out and that each class have a class meeting where teachers can give necessary guidance about a balanced diet. They would make a difference to their figures.（129字）

【解析】

考查图表写作。

题目要求如今，随着生活条件的改善，越来越多的孩子开始发胖。最近，某校高一年级就”如何保持苗条身材”进行问卷调查，调查结果如下面饼状图（pie chart）所示。请据此用英语写一篇短文, 报道此次调查结果，并给出你的建议。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。