[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词, 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

With time passed by, and my senior high school life is almost over. In a few days’ time, I will be graduating in this school. Now I’m looking back on the past. One of the best memory is the military training, activity in which we performed our best. Another thing that I’m particular impressed with is the school trip. These things are so wonderful, but the highlight is the New Year’s party. We sing songs and played games. I will never forget the time when I spent with my friends and teachers. It is because of his company that I have had such an; amazed experience.

【答案】

【解析】第一处：考查状语，with+n+动词ing as+n+动词一般现在时/过去时故将passed改为passing

第二处：and 前面应是一个完整的句子而本文是一个状语故将and去掉

第三处：考查介词用法 graduate from 从....毕业故将in改为from

第四处：考查名词单复数形式 one of 后面名词应用复数故将memory改为memories

第五处：考查冠词用法 activity 不是复数故需要添加冠词an

第六处：考查副词用法副词修饰动词故将 particular改为particularly

第七处：考查名词时态此句中的是发生在过去应后文played时态保持一致，故将sing改为 sang

第八处：考查定语从句用法用 that which修饰 time 用when的话后面应为完整句子故将when改为 that/which 或省略

第九处：考查代词用法前方有关键词friends and teachers 故将his改为their

第十处：考查形容词用法 amazing修饰事 amazed 修饰人的感觉故将amazed改为amazing

练习册系列答案

增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advices on how to form a band.

I, together by two boys and two girls from different classes in our school, wanted to form a band. We are all fond of pop music and modern dance, but they still have many problems to solve. I’d like to know that we should play one kind of music or different style to start with. And is it enough to practice only at weekends? Why can we get more chances to perform? In addition, we’d appreciate if you would be come up with a name for our band.

Thanks to your considering our above questions, Mr. Cousins. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My grandma lives in the country and has a big yard.Although she is over seventy,she lives the active life, making her yard look a farm.She likes animals,so she kept five dogs,two cats,six hens,and four geese.The hens and geese regular lay eggs,most of that she gives to me.

It is a hard task to feed and cares for all these animals.But she likes it.My grandma also grows many more vegetables in my yard.As a rule,she grows plants without chemical fertilizers and prevents pests without use farm chemicals.Her vegetables are organic or we all like them!

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen,

I would tell you some good news.To provide more chances for us to practise the English, I have recently set up an English group blog naming We Love English.

Variously things can be done on the blog. Firstly, we can post our journals here, sharing our thoughts and daily life. Secondly, the blog is a good place for us to exchange our good learning experiences, which will certainly lead to learn English well. Thirdly, if we should have any problems with our English study, just putting them on the blog, where we will soon find effective solutions the problems offered by other students.

Everybody are welcome to join the group blog. I’m sure you will benefit greatly of it.

That’s all. Thank you.

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My dream school starts at 8: 30 a. m. and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with afterschool activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

【题目】如今，随着生活条件的改善，越来越多的孩子开始发胖。最近，某校高一年级就”如何保持苗条身材”进行问卷调查，调查结果如下面饼状图（pie chart）所示。请据此用英语写一篇短文, 报道此次调查结果，并给出你的建议。

（写作要求）

1.词数：120左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

From our recent survey of students, we have found that____________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华。最近你和同学组织了“文明使用共享单车”的活动，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给校刊“英语角”写一篇稿件介绍你们的活动过程。注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：1.civilized 文明的

2. leaflets 宣传单

____________________________________________________________________________________________

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I live in a distant village in the mountains,which people like raising dogs.I have an adult dog and he was not very big in size.Last week,the relative sent two little dogs to me.They were unable to walk well,even fall to the ground now and then.They moved like two fur balls,funny and lovely.

However,I feared that if the adult dog might dislike them and even attack them.So I kept the two little one in a box.One day,I was astonishing to see the adult dog lying in the box.Under them comfortably lay the two little dogs!Now the three dogs get along well one another and live happy together.

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’ve just returned back from my spring break after visit my brother America. His school had just finished their break, so I get a chance to pay a visit to it. At the front door which there was a special machine,he had to call a security guard to take me to the main office to get a special pass. Then, dog smelt me by its nose.There were cameras anywhere, except in the bathrooms. I felt like I was a thief. Personally, I don't think a school need to be like a prison. It should be a comfortable place for student to study in happy.

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