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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.


【小题1】第一句：去掉that
【小题2】第二句： towns
【小题3】第三句： particular
【小题4】第四句： which改成where
【小题5】第五句： were改成are 
【小题6】第六句： have与child之间加a 
【小题7】第七句： with water 改成 of water
【小题8】第八句： taught 
【小题9】第九句： without
【小题10】第十句： himself 

解析试题分析：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。
【小题1】第一句：去掉that  本句是一个非限制性定语从句，as指代后面一句话的内容，在句中做主语，后面的连接词That是多余的。
【小题2】第二句： towns    前面有most修饰，后面的谓语动词是have，说明这里应该使用的是复数形式towns。
【小题3】第三句： particular  后面的名词lessons需要使用形容词particular来修饰，副词particularly在句中主要是做状语，而不能做定语。
【小题4】第四句： which改成where 在定语从句中，句子结构很完整，故使用关系副词where指代先行词Europe在句中做地点状语。
【小题5】第五句： were改成are   本文的基本时态是一般现在时，故使用are，而不是were。
【小题6】第六句： have与child之间加a 本句中child是一个可数名词单数形式，所以前面使用a修饰。而且后面出现了the child更说明这里使用单数形式。
【小题7】第七句： with water 改成 of water 本句是指对水的恐惧和害怕，使用of表示所属关系。
【小题8】第八句： taught   本句是一个被动语态：他被教在水里漂浮。
【小题9】第九句： without 一旦你可以自然地做那些失去，就就可以毫无恐惧地游泳了。根据上下文可知这里使用否定意思的介词without。
【小题10】第十句： himself 本句是指孩子让自己前进，使用反身代词himself做宾语，表示强调。
考点：考察短文改错

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（＿），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处
Tim, I am Li Hua． This is my last year of high school, and I'll graduate this summer．I'm eighteen year old．
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I'm cheerful boy． Besides my courses, I have much hobbies, like playing football, basketball and swimming．In the past, I collected in a lot of stamps, which are very preciously now because we seldom post a letter nowadays．I wonder if you can tell me something about myself, your family and daily school life．

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【小题1】Mary had to shout to make herself hear above the sound of the music.
【小题2】If I studied hard at school, I would work in a comfortable office now.
【小题3】Over 80% of the 3.6 million people are of Europe origin.
【小题4】It rains a lot and that’s why I always carry an umbrella with me.
【小题5】Canadian singer and song writer, Alanis Morissette, is used to be in the public eye.
【小题6】.In 1983,there were only 200 computers connecting to the Internet.
【小题7】We have to take immediate actions or I fear that life on Earth will get worse.
【小题8】I wonder what Cathy is up to do this weekend.
【小题9】The history of the city, which has a warm climate with a plenty of sunshine, goes back to 650 years.
【小题10】We were suggested that the argument was dealt with through peace talks.

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
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假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
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