Question

【题目】书面表达。

某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep good relationship(关系) with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇100词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:

1.父母规矩太多、过于强调学习成绩、不理解自己等问题；

2. 你对这些问题的看法；

3. 你与父母保待良好关系的做法。

注意： 1.词数：80-100；

2.可是当发挥，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不要出现真实校名和人名。

How to keep good relationship with parents

Answer 1

【答案】

How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me. I think all these rules are too strict.

However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。所给材料比较详细，提示调理清晰，我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文要注意人称的变化，时态的搭配以及主谓一致，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上注意使用多种句式，同时还使用了表示次序的连接词，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。此外，一些常用短语如：allow sb. to do, pay attention to, try one’s best to do, in order to 等短语的使用，使文章内容更为丰富。