Question

【题目】2016年江苏省初中英语听力口语自动化考试已经结束。假定你是初三学生Daniel, 你们学校学生会邀请你向全校同学进行经验介绍。请根据以下提纲准备一份英文发言稿：

1. 你是如何准备本次考试的；

2. 你从中获得怎样的收获与感受；

3. 你对提高英语听说能力的建议。

注意：1. 发言稿中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 词数80左右，发言稿的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone! I’m Daniel. It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions. The listening and speaking test has been over.

Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone! I’m Daniel. It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions. The listening and speaking test has been over. In order to get a good result, I focused on every English lesson. After class, I read and recited those topics carefully according to our English teacher’s demand. Also, I did listening exercises almost every day.

To my surprise, I’m not afraid of speaking English before others any more. What’s more, I am better at listening and speaking. Although I feel tired, I am very happy and become more confident.

Here is my advice on how to improve them. First of all, take an active part in class activities. Watch more English films if possible. Moreover, it’s a good way to improve your ability by learning English songs.

Thank you for listening!

【解析】

试题分析：本文内容要求你写一篇发言稿。本文应以第一人称和一般现在时态叙事为主。灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如: in order to，according to, to my surprise, be afraid of, be better at等；after class ,also,what’s more, although, moreover等词的恰当使用, 使文章的表达更有逻辑性、更富有条理。