Question

【题目】 假如你的好朋友李华长期沉迷于游戏而影响了学习，作为好朋友的你该如何去劝Ta?

1.要点：1）痴迷于玩游戏的坏处；

2）应该怎么做：多读书，发展兴趣，积极锻炼等

2.要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

2）词数100左右。

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear Li Hua,

I feel very worried when I hear that you are addicted to computer games. They will be harmful to you in many ways.

To begin with, they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things. In addition, playing games for a long time will do harm to your health, especially to your eyes. Worse still, some games are full of violence, which will be harmful to your mental health. Therefore I strongly hope that you can stay away from them earlier. In order to live a meaningful life, you can read more good books, take more exercise to build up or participate in some social activities to expand your horizons.

Look forward to your good news.

Yours,

Lily

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文要求根据要点写一遍短文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求；再根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡平稳、自然流畅。