Question

1．一家知名外债企业准备与当地政府合作修建一所国际学校．为了建好、办好学校，该企业总裁Mr．White 广泛征求学生的意见，并公开了他的邮箱．请以"周杉"的名义给他写一封E-mail，谈谈你的建议及理由．
内容要点：
1．学习环境（如：教室、操场…）
2．特色课程（如：网球、钢琴…）
3．…
要求
1．词数：80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think the new school should be nice and pleasant我认为新的学校应该是好看的愉快的．
think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
It would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they can get some useful experience给学生一些在你公司实践的机会将会更好，那样他们能获得一些有用的经验．
so that引导的目的状语从句．

解答 Dear Mr．White，
I'm glad to hear you'll build an international school，and I'd like to give you some advice．I think the new school should be nice and pleasant．【高分句型一】Students need bright classrooms to study in，modern libraries to open up their eyes，large playgrounds to play different kinds of sports on．（学习环境）The school may provide students with some special courses，such as art，tennis or piano lessons．These courses can make students relaxed and encourage them to develop freely．
（特色课程）It would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they can get some useful experience．【高分句型二】（实习机会）
I hope I can enter the school．
Sincerely yours，
Zhou Shan

点评 要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意将提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点．注意主谓一致问题．写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等．