题目内容
16.某英语报社举行"我爱家乡"征文大赛.请你以I love my hometown-Qiandongnan为题,根据下列提示和要求写一篇短文参赛.提示:
1、黔东南位于贵州省东南部,人口约4,469,100.
2、夏天较热,但冬天不太冷.
3、黔东南有许多著名的旅游胜地,如:舞阳河、雷公山、剑河温泉、西江苗寨等.
4、黔东南正在快速的发展,路宽了、水清了、绿地多了,变得越来越美了.
要求:
1、词数80词左右.
2、在文中不能出现本人的真实信息.
参考词汇:
温泉hot spring 苗寨:Miao village 绿地:grassland
I love my hometown-Qiandongnan .
分析 【高分句型一】
It is a beautiful place with a population of 4,469,100是一个美丽的地方,人口约4,469,100.
with短语表伴随.
【高分句型二】
It's becoming more and more beautiful变得越来越美丽了.
比较级+and+比较级:越来越…
解答 I love my hometown-Qiandongnan
Qiandongnan lies in the southeast of Guizhou Province.It is a beautiful place with a population of 4,469,100.【高分句型一】(黔东南位于贵州省东南部,人口约4,469,100.)It is very hot in summer but not rather cold in winter.(夏天较热,但冬天不太冷.)We have many famous places of interest here.Such as Wuyang River,Leigong Mountain,hot spring in Jianhe,Xijiang Miao village and so on(黔东南有许多著名的旅游胜地,如:舞阳河、雷公山、剑河温泉、西江苗寨等.).Qiandongnan is developing very fast.The streets are wider.The water is clearer.You can see grassland here and there.It's becoming more and more beautiful.【高分句型二】(黔东南正在快速的发展,路宽了、水清了、绿地多了,变得越来越美了.)
I love my hometown.Welcome to Qiandongnan.
点评 写作时要注意一些几点:
(1)应抓住文章中心,围绕主题,根据提示列出要写的信息要点.
(2)注意内容是否充实、积极和健康.
(3)注意文章的结构层次,要凸显文章的主题.
(4)要注意语言规范,表达准确,选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料.
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