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10.Write a letter in at least 60words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信)
Suppose you are Joe.Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too
much about the result.What do you think?Try to offer her some advice.(假如你是Joe,你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑.请给她写一封信,谈谈你的看法,并给她一些建议.)

分析 这是一篇给材料作文.本文要写的材料比较具体,一是要我们说出自己的看法,二是给Betty一些建议.我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来.我们要好好选用词汇和短语,可以适当发挥.根据材料内容可知本文是书信体,主要是一般现在时态,要用好表示建议的句子.注意行文的连词,如first,second,等等.
高分句型:
①First,keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful.首先,提醒自己保持平静是最有帮助的.这里keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace 是动名词短语做主语,the most helpful是helpful的最高级形式.
②Second,it will help you to relax if you spend some time doing some after school activities like sports.其次,如果你抽出时间做一些课外活动,比如体育运动,将会帮助你放松一下.句子中if引导一个条件状语从句,主句用一般将来时,从句用一般现在时,spend time doing sth花费时间做某事.

解答 Dear Betty,(称呼语)
Knowing that you care too much about the result of the coming exam,I am quite worried.Actually,the most important thing is not the result of the exam but the learning journey.(引出话题)
  There are some effective ways to calm down.First,keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful(高分句型).Second,it will help you to relax if you spend some time doing some after school activities like sports(高分句型).Finally,talk to your parents and friends,who are always ready to comfort you.In a word,the result itself is not really important,but we should work hard while learning.(我的看法及建议)
Yours,
Joe(结束语)

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,多阅读此类题材,将词汇归类整理;动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写出关键单词.写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.

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