Question

【题目】书面表达

你妹妹的生日就要到了，你和父母一起去商场为她挑选礼物。根据表格提示，写一篇70词左右的短文。可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。(用一般现在时表达即可)

人物	礼物	原因
爸爸	李健的CD	……
妈妈	玩具熊	……
我	书	……

My sister’s birthday is coming._____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My sister’s birthday is coming. My parents and I go to the shop to choose some presents for her. My sister likes music and she always listens to songs by her favorite singer, Li Jian. So my father chooses a CD by Li Jian. My mother buys a toy bear because my sister loves animals, and the bear is her favorite. She enjoys reading, so I choose a book for her. I think she must be happy when she gets our presents.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be coming，go to the shop，listens to songs，enjoy doing，must be等。而并列句My sister likes music and she always listens to songs by her favorite singer, Li Jian.和My mother buys a toy bear because my sister loves animals, and the bear is her favorite. /She enjoys reading, so I choose a book for her. /I think she must be happy when she gets our presents.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。