Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你们校学生会号召全体同学为建设绿色家园贡献自己的力量。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈环境保护的重要性，日常生活中你为保护环境都做了什么，以及你做完后的感受。

提示词语：water the trees and flowers, collect the waste, happy, proud

提示问题：

● What do you think of protecting the environment?

● What do you do in your everyday life to protect the environment?

● How do you feel about what you have done?

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Answer 1

【答案】At my school, we held a practical activity about how to make a green school last week. In the activity, I watered the trees and flowers. And I collected waste which can be recycled or used again. I also learnt ways to save energy. Though I was tired, I was very happy.

　　I think it’ s important to keep the environment clean. I believe if everyone pays attention to our environment protection, my school will be more beautiful and comfortable to study in.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，就“建设绿色校园”为主题的社会实践活动开展大讨论。谈谈环境保护的重要性。

动笔前要先认真阅读要点，尽量将提示的内容利用上；以提示的问题作为写作的主线，重点从三个方面去写作：

1.你认为保护环境怎么样？

2.你在活动中做了什么？

3.你感觉怎么样？

结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，运用一般过去时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。