题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是李华,将参加今年暑期的英国伦敦游学(study tour)活动,英方提供了两个家庭供你选择居住,并征询你对游学活动的建议.请阅读以下信息,写一封电子邮件回复.
The Green family
an old couple
no children
two dogs
a flat, in the centre of London
wi﹣fi
350pounds
The Black family
a middle﹣aged couple
a junior school boy
a primary school girl
a house, a little far from London
a garden
230pounds
要求:1.所写内容必须包括某一家的所有信息及你选择的理由;
2.结合自身情况提出1﹣2点游学活动的建议;
3.文章不少于90词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
5.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I have read the information about the two families. And I have decided to live in
Many thanks,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir,
I have read the information about the two families.I have decided to live in the Green family.The old couple have no children but two dogs,so they will have more time to communicate with me in English and I can play with their pets as well.Their flat is in the centre of London ,so it's easy for me to go around.I can also use the Wi﹣fi to keep in touch with my parents.My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds.
I also have good ideas for the study tour.I love history,so I wonder if we can visit the British Museum during the stay.I'm curious about British food as well,so if you can take us to have a taste, that will be very wonderful.
I'm really looking forward to this tour!
Many thanks,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇材料作文。假如你是李华,将参加今年暑期的英国伦敦游学(study tour)活动,英方提供了两个家庭供你选择居住,并征询你对游学活动的建议。请阅读以下信息,写一封电子邮件回复。仔细阅读材料和要求提示。这些提示要点构成写作的基本框架。动笔前要认真阅读,不要遗漏要点提示,并适当发挥。根据提示要点,列出本文的写作提纲,提纲包括所有提示要点。写完以后,注意再读一遍,看看有无拼写、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。本文提纲:
亲爱的先生,
我已经读过关于这两个家庭的信息。我决定住在格林家。这对老夫妇没有孩子,只有两只狗,所以他们有更多的时间用英语和我交流,我也可以和他们的宠物一起玩。他们的公寓在伦敦市中心,所以我很容易四处走动。我也可以使用wi-fi和父母保持联系。我的家人能负担350英镑的费用。
我对学习之旅也有很好的想法。我热爱历史,所以我想知道我们是否可以在逗留期间参观大英博物馆。我对英国食物也很好奇,所以如果你能带我们去品尝一下,那将是非常美妙的。
我真的很期待这次旅行!
多谢,
李华