Question

【题目】世界上最伟大的是母亲，母亲为我们付出了很多。结合自己的经历。以“I love my mother”为题，写一篇英文短文，以表达对母亲的感激之情。

提示：1.some information about your mother 2.an experience about how your mother took care of you 3.your love to your mother

要求：1.参考提示信息，可适当发挥。 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。3.文中不得出现任何真实的信息（姓名，校名和地名等）。4.词数，不少于70词。

Answer 1

【答案】I Love My mother
In my eyes, my mother is the most beautiful woman in the world. She has typical Asian features: yellow skin and black hair, but what catches the attention of people is her eyes. Her eyes are as clear and bright as the night sky, and whenever she smiles, they would glow up and shine like a million twinkling stars. Nobody could possibly stay angry or depressed under such a smile, and even a heart of stone would crumble under her shine.
She is also the gentlest person alive. Once, when I scraped my knee by accident, she flew like a wind to my side, and took out a piece of alcohol swab to clean the cut. It stung like I was being bit by a bee, so she started blowing the red rash on my knee. The light gust of wind coming out of her mouth soothed the pain, and suddenly I had the courage to stand up again. I looked up into her eyes, eyes filled with concentration and gentleness.
I love my mother for all that she has given me,and always will

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，要表达对母亲的感激之情。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如最高级the most beautiful，catch the attention，as+原级+as，the courage to，fill with以及stand up。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。