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16.你的朋友Bill送给你一份生日礼物,请写一封信表示感谢并告诉他你的生日宴会的情况.要求:1.70个单词左右;2.语言规范,书写工整;3.不得出现真实姓名.
Dear Bill,
Thanks for your birthday present.
I had a birthday party yesterday.I felt very happy.My mother made a big birthday cake with my name on it.My father gave many books to me.My friends came to my birthday party,too.They gave many gifts to me.They all said Happy Birthday to me.And I had a happy birthday party..

分析 高分句型一
I had a birthday party yesterday.   昨天我举办了一个生日聚会.注意时态应该用一般过去时.
  高分句型二
 My mother made a big birthday cake with my name on it.我妈妈做了一个生日蛋糕,上面有我的名字.with介词词组,表示伴随的情况.

解答 Dear Bill,
Thanks for your birthday present.【要点一,向比尔表示感谢】
I had a birthday party yesterday【高分句型一,注意一般过去时的使用】.I felt very happy.My mother made a big birthday cake with my name on it【高分句型二,注意with词组的使用】.My father gave many books to me.My friends came to my birthday party,too.They gave many gifts to me.They all said Happy Birthday to me.And I had a happy birthday party.【要点二,生日宴会的情况】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.

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