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4．2014年起，连云港市政府为解决本市居民出行的"最后一公里"问
题，逐步投入公共自行车，这是便民、环保的一个有力举措．截至2015年4月，城市主干道、BRT站、小区等多处已全方位配套此设施．作为中学生，你要推广公共自行车的好处，让更多的人知道政府此举的重要性，呼吁人们少开车，多骑行，保护环境．
要点如下：
1．骑公共自行车出行方便，可以随时租还．
2．缓解交通拥挤，不仅省时间，还省钱．
3．可以健身，减肥．
4．欣赏沿途风光，心情好．
5．你的呼吁…（至少2句）
要求：1．短文必须包含所有要点，适当发挥，行文要连贯．
2.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Now，public bikes are widely used in Lianyungang．I think it's a good thing．
It isconvenientto ride a public bicycle．Itcan be rented at any time．Riding a public bicycle canease traffic congestion．It savesnot only time，but also money．Riding a public bicycle is good for our health，and weight loss．We canenjoy the scenery along the way，and we have good mood．I think we should ride public bicycles as much as possible．We should drive cars as little as possible．If we do that，we should protect our environment．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 It is convenient for us to ride a public bicycle．骑公共自行车对我们来说是方便的．这是it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型，对于…来说…是方便的． 
  高分句型二
 If we do that，our environment will be better．如果我们这样做，我们的环境会更好． 这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．

解答 Now，public bikes are widely used in Lianyungang．I think it's a good thing．
It is convenient for us to ride a public bicycle．【高分句型一，注意it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】It can be rented at any time【要点一，骑公共自行车出行方便，可以随时租还】．Riding a public bicycle can ease traffic congestion．It saves not only time，but also money【要点二，缓解交通拥挤，不仅省时间，还省钱】．Riding a public bicycle is good for our health and weight loss．【要点三，可以健身，减肥】We can enjoy the scenery along the way，and we can have good mood．【要点四，欣赏沿途风光，心情好】I think we should ride public bicycles as much as possible．We should drive cars as little as possible．If we do that，our environment will be better．【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】【要点五，呼吁】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．