Question

11．作为学生，我们应该怎样做一个合格的环保者．请以"How  to  Protect  the  environment"写一篇70词的作文．
提示词：leave rubbish，here and there，don't spit，care for wild animals，plant trees，do
everything，walk on grass，pick flowers，..As we all know，the environment around us is getting worse and worse．We should do something to protect ourenvironment．The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping．It helps to protect the environment．The second thing we can do is that we shouldn'tleave rubbish and spit here and there．Also，we should never forget to turn off the lights and TVwhen we leave the classrooms in order to save energy．What's more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school．We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste．We shouldn't use disposable plates，bowls．We should plant more trees and grow grass to prevent it．We should also prevent people from cutting down too many trees．We shouldn't walk on the grass and pick flowers．In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make areal difference to the environment．I believe we can make the world a better place to live in．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
1．The first thing①we can do is ②to use cloth bags③instead of plastic  bags ④when we go shopping．第一件我们能做的事情是购物的时候用布袋不用塑料袋．
①we can do作为定语从句，修饰先行词thing，关系词which作为从句的宾语，可以省略．
②动词不定式做表语，与is构成系表结构．
③instead of 代替…而不是…
④when引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
Also，we should never ①forget to ②turn off the lights and TV③when we leave the classrooms ④in order to save energy．离开教室的时候我们也不应该忘记关灯和电视，为了节约能量．
①forget to do sth 忘了去做某事．
②turn off 关…
③when引导的时间状语从句．
④in order to 为了…，表目的，做目的状语．

解答 How  to  Protect  the  environment
As we all know，the environment around us is getting worse and worse．We should do something to protect ourenvironment．The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic  bags when we go shopping．【高分句型一】It helps to protect the environment．（在购物时用布袋替代塑料袋）The second thing we can do is that we shouldn't leave rubbish and spit here and there （不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰）Also，we should never forget to turn off the lights and TV when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy．【高分句型二】（离开教室应关灯电视）What's more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school．（最好走路或骑自行车上班）We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste．We shouldn't use disposable plates，bowls．（我们不应该使用一次性盘子，碗等等）We should plant more trees and grow grass to prevent it．We should also prevent people from cutting down too many trees．We shouldn't walk on the grass and pick flowers（不要滥砍树）In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment．I believe we can make the world a better place to live in．

点评 动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．