Question

【题目】书面表达。请将答案写在答题卡相应的位置上。（10分）

根据所给图画和文字提示，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。

参考词汇：wine 酒 drunk 醉酒的

Answer 1

【答案】

Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers. As a result he got drunk.

After the meal, his friends tried to persude him not to drive home , but he didn’t listen to them, saying No problem and insisted on doing so.

He got into the car and drove away. A few minuties later, he was winding his way in the street. And suddenly his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital.

He had to stay in hospital for a few days beacause of being seriously hurt. He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文。看图作文要注意一下几点（1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节。（2）结合提示词，明确考查意图。所给提示词可帮助理解画面内容，也是组成句子的必用材料。有时还会给出起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。

写作亮点：这篇短文能把握故事情节，能正确的运用过去时态。合理的利用连词，如As a result ，After the meal, but ，A few minuties later, And suddenly等，这使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。