Question

【题目】书面表达（满分15分）

2015年4月11日，南京溧水傅家边山地半程马拉松比赛（Nanjing Lishui Fujiabian Mountain Half-Marathon）在傅家边隆重举行。假如你是李华，请用英语给你的笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，告诉他关于本届半程马拉松的相关情况和你对举办这样比赛的看法。

要求：

1. 邮件需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

2. 词数：80字左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称。

Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to tell you something about Mountain Half-Marathon which was held in Fujiabian, Lishui.

Please come and visit my hometown. I will show you around my beautiful hometown.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to tell you something about Mountain Half-Marathon which was held in Fujiabian, Lishui.

You know health is becoming more and more important in our daily life. In order to encourage more people to take part in sports and keep the body healthy, our local government held this big event. And at the same time, it was a good chance to show the beauty of my hometown. Because it was mountain half-marathon, runners needed to finish about 21-kilometre-long race, and all the runners must be over 18 years old and healthy. During this event, there were lots of volunteers. Some of them worked as doctors, some kept the event safe and others provided free drinks and food. With the help of all these people, the event had a big success. I hope more events like this can be held in the future.

Please come and visit my hometown. I will show you around my beautiful hometown.

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。本篇短文主要讲述偶尔在南京溧水傅家边山地举行的半程马拉松比赛，文中交代了比赛的目的；距离；运动员；志愿者；及作者的观点。写作时尤其注意主谓和时态的正确。可适当使用一些连词来增加文章的逻辑性，使文章更通顺流畅。

写作亮点：这篇短文结构完整，要点齐全，表达准确流畅。文章使用了很多实用的表达方式，如：You know health is becoming more and more important in our daily life；And at the same time, it was a good chance to show the beauty of my hometown.这些句式的运用给文章增色不少。