Question

【题目】Writing (作文):

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic "How to Celebrate Graduation."（以“如何庆祝毕业”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

Situation:临近毕业,班里的同学们打算举行一次毕业庆祝活动，他们在讨论征集庆祝活动的建议。以"How to Celebrate Graduation"为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的建议并陈述理由。

（注意，短文中不得出现考生的姓名,校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Celebrate Graduation

How time flies! We are going to graduate from middle school. To celebrate this unforgettable moment, as one of the graduates, I would like to offer some advice on how to celebrate graduation.

First, we can change our classroom into the festive hall, and invite our parents and teachers to enjoy our elaborate performances. Second, all of us can go to DIY Cookhouse to make a big meal for our parents and teachers to express appreciation. Last, we can revisit every place of school together, and take some photos with friends. Furthermore, we can sing the old songs that we ever shared together.

The above four points are my opinions. I hope they can be accepted.

【解析】

试题分析：该题目要求学生以"How to Celebrate Graduation"为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对举行毕业庆祝活动的建议并陈述理由。根据题目要求可知该文主要以一般现在时为主，用第一人称书写。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用First、Second, Last以及Furthermore等词，使得文章非常条理，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。