Question

【题目】假设你叫李俊，你的美国朋友David想要在中国结交更多的朋友。你通过电子邮件，把你的同学王明介绍给他.王明情况见下表:

要求: 1)、注意文章条理，语句通顺。
2)、词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear David,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jun

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you.

He is 15 years old. He is tall with two big eyes. He is tall and has short hair.

Wang Ming has a good sense of humor. He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy. He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends. He never says a bad word about others.

He is crazy about DIY. It was my birthday last week. He made a birthday card for me. He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Birdwatching Society. Among/Of the four seasons, he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends.

He has a good voice and is good at singing. So he wants to be a singer when he grows up.

I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Jun

【解析】本文属于材料作文，向你美国的朋友大卫介绍王明。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如sense of humor, funny, make us happy, honest, keep secret, crazy, among, voice, grow up, make friends以及as soon as possible等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。