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18．生活中我们每天都在与人交往，也许你曾经遇到过这样的困境：你想在聚会上穿的衣服脏了让妈妈帮你洗，然而妈妈因为工作太忙没有时间洗；与同学共同完成墙报（a wallnewspaper）时，你有一个自认为很好的想法没有被采纳；你最近学习很忙，但是向你请教问题的同学很执着；…你是怎样做的？
现在，请你就与人交往（communicating with others）的话题向《21世纪英语报》投稿． 描述一次你解决与他人交往困境的经历，并谈谈你的感受．
提示词语：experience； get on well； help； talk； by oneself； understand； respect； share； enjoy
In ourlife，we communicate with others every day．It's important to get on well witheach other．However，it's not an easy thing．
Once，two of myclassmates and I were working on a wallnewspaper．I thought I had agreat idea but they didn't use it．I was sad and decided never to talk to them．But after giving it a second thought，I talked to them，telling them about myfeelings and how I wished they could use my idea．They apologized to mesincerely and explained to me the reason．We got to understand each other andcame up with a better idea which made the wall newspaper eye-catching．
From theexperience，I know how important it is to have aheart-to-heart talk，especiallywhen having problems．If we try to understand each other more，we will enjoy abetter relationship and more happiness．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We got to understand each other and①came up with a better idea ②which made the wall newspaper eye-catching．我们互相理解，想出了一个更好的主意，这使得墙上的报纸引人注目．．
①come up with想出
②which引导的定语从句，修饰先行词idea，在定语从句中充当主语．
高分句型二：①If we try to understand each other more，we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness．如果我们试着更多地了解对方，我们将享受更好的关系和更多的幸福．
①if引导的条件状语从句，时态遵循主将从现．

解答 One possible version：
   In our life，we communicate with others every day．It's important to get on well with each other．However，it's not an easy thing．
Once，two of my classmates and I were working on a wall newspaper．I thought I had agreat idea but they didn't use it．I was sad and decided never to talk to them．But after giving it a second thought，I talked to them，telling them about my feelings and how I wished they could use my idea．They apologized to mesincerely and explained to me the reason．We got to understand each other and came up with a better idea which made the wall newspaper eye-catching．【高分句型一】【具体描述一次解决与他人交往困境的经历】
From the experience，I know how important it is to have a heart-to-heart talk，especiallywhen having problems．If we try to understand each other more，we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness．【高分句型二】【我的感受】

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