题目内容
3.在成长过程中,你得到了家人、老师及朋友的关爱,你一定对他们心存感激吧!请你以Dear…,Thank You for Your Love 为题(请补全题目),用英语写一篇短文,叙述你的家人、老师或者朋友为你做过的一件令你深深感动的事情,并表达你的感激之情.要求:1)词数不少于80;2)作文中不得出现个人姓名、学校名称及其它相关个人真实信息,否则不予评分.
Dear mum,
Thank you for your love!I am very happy to have such a great mother.You are always very kind to me.When I am sick you look after me,and you try to give me everything that I want in the world.When I'm in trouble,you always encourage me to be confident【高分句型一】.Many people say that I am lucky to have such a good mother,so I want to say thank you to you!And when I grow up,I want you to be proud of me!【高分句型二】
Thank you for your love again!
Yours,
David.
分析 【高分句型一】When I'm in trouble,you always encourage me to be confident.当我遇到麻烦的时候,你总是鼓励我要自信. 句式:encourage sb.to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
【高分句型二】And when I grow up,I want you to be proud of me!当我长大了,我想让你为我感到自豪.
When引导时间状语从句,用一般现在时表将来.
解答 Dear mum,
Thank you for your love!I am very happy to have such a great mother.You are always very kind to me.When I am sick you look after me,and you try to give me everything that I want in the world.When I'm in trouble,you always encourage me to be confident【高分句型一】.Many people say that I am lucky to have such a good mother,so I want to say thank you to you!And when I grow up,I want you to be proud of me!【高分句型二】
Thank you for your love again!
Yours,
David
点评 解答这种题目时,我们应该仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点. 要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯. 在平常的学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,让文章更出彩.