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19.最近,老师布置一道作业,就"Can parents be friends?"这一问题在同学中间开展一次调查,下表是调查的结果
观点原因
45%的同学不可能父母太忙
没有时间关心他们
对他们要求严格
55%的同学可 能父母常常和他们谈心
遇到烦心的事可以向父母寻求帮助
你的观点…..…..
请根据以上调查数据,写一份80--100词左右的调查报告.
注意:
1.报告开头已给出;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名.
I recently surveyed my classmates about their views on whether parents can be friends.
According to the survey,45% of the students in our class think it impossible to makefriends with their parents as they're too busy to show their concern.And their parents are very strict with them.On the other hand,55% of the students believe they can makefriends with their parents because their parents often talk withthem like friends.Children can ask their parents for help when they are introuble.
In my opinion,it's just natural for parents and children to be friends.They love each other and understand each other very well.Children can get some valuable advice from their parents..

分析 这是一篇图表作文.内容是写一篇关于父母能否成为朋友的调查报告.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.45%的同学;认为不可能,父母太忙,没有时间关心他们,对他们要求严格
2.55%的同学;认为可能,父母常常和他们谈心,遇到烦心的事可以向父母寻求帮助
3.你的观点
常用到的重点短语:
too…to do sth太…而不能做某事
be strict with sb 对某人严格
on the other hand 另一方面
make friends 交朋友
in trouble 处于困境
【高分句型】
1.According to the survey,45% of the students in our class think①it impossible to make friends with their parents②as they're③too busy to show their concern.
①it是形式宾语,动词不定式是真正宾语,构成think it+adj+to do sth 认为做某事是怎么样的
②as引导的原因状语从句.
③too…to do sth太…而不能做某事
2.①On the other hand,55% of the students believe②they can make friends with their parents③because their parents often ④talk with them like friends.
①on the other hand 另一方面
②believe后是省略了that的宾语从句.
③because引导的原因状语从句.
④talk with sb 与某人交谈
3.Children can①ask their parents for help②when they are in trouble.
①ask ab for help 寻求某人的帮忙
②when引导的时间状语从句.in trouble 处于困境

解答 I recently surveyedmy classmates about their views on whether parents can be friends.
According to the survey,45% of the students in our class think it impossible to make friends with their parents as they're too busy to show their concern.【高分句型】And their parents are very strict with them.(45%的同学;认为不可能及原因)On the other hand,55% of the students believe they can make friends with their parents because their parents often talk with them like friends.【高分句型】Children can ask their parents for help when they are in trouble.【高分句型】(55%的同学;认为可能及原因)
   In my opinion,it's just natural for parents and children to be friends.They love each other and understand each other very well.Children can get some valuable advice from their parents.(我的观点及原因)

点评 这题图表类作文,所给材料较为详细,逻辑清楚,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来.根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般现在时态,主语为第三人称,句型以简单句为主.写作时要灵活运用,注意主谓一致,单词拼写正确.
本题因为要点已经很明确,要注意使用正确的英语句型,避免出现汉语表达.写作中注意一些基础的写作常识,不犯低级错误.只要平时积累足够,就一定能写出一篇满意的作文.

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