Question

7．假如这幅漫画表现的是你经历的事情，请你根据所给提示描述事情经过并谈谈你的看法．

提示词：jaywalk vi．乱穿马路；run the red light闯红灯
注意：文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名．词数80-100．
Friday afternoon，when I was on my way home from school，I saw a group of people jaywalking at the crossing．A volunteer tried to stop them，but no one listened to him．Instead，they ran the red light quickly．Just then，a bus came．One of them was nearly hit by the running bus．
In my opinion，jaywalking is a bad habit．It puts not only yourself but also other people in danger．I hope all of us should keep the traffic rules and stop running the red light．Look both sides/ways when you cross the road．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是请你根据漫画所描述的事情经过并谈谈你的看法．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画；一群人乱闯马路，有人去阻止，不搭理，有一位差点被撞倒
2．我的看法；
 
常用到的重点短语：
on one's way to sp 某人去某地的路上
see sb doing sth 看见某人正在做某事
try to do sth 尽力做某事
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
in danger 处于危险中

【高分句型】
1．It puts①not only yourself but also other people②in danger．
①not only…but also…不仅…而且…
②in danger 处于危险中
2．I hope①all of us should keep the traffic rules and②stop running the red light．
①hope后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②stop doing sth 停止做某事
3．Look both sides/ways when you cross the road．
when引导的时间状语从句

解答 Friday afternoon，when I was on my way home from school，I saw a group of people jaywalking at the crossing．A volunteer tried to stop them，but no one listened to him．Instead，they ran the red light quickly．Just then，a bus came．One of them was nearly hit by the running bus．（描述图画）
In my opinion，jaywalking is a bad habit．It puts not only yourself but also other people in danger．【高分句型】I hope all of us should keep the traffic rules and stop running the red light．【高分句型】Look both sides/ways when you cross the road【高分句型】（我的看法）

点评 这是一篇看图作文．由于是描述过去的经历，故用一般过去时态，根据要求用第一人称．
这篇短文层次分明，语言流畅，能把要点表达清楚．In my opinion，not only…but also等的应用给短文增色不少．