题目内容
16.成长的过程中,我们都曾得到过许多建议(advice),对你最有帮助的是哪一条呢?请写一篇不少于80词的短文,和我们分享你的理解与收获.内容要求:(1)描述这条建议;
(2)据此你所采取的行动;
(3)你的收获和体会.
注意:短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息.
ThebestadviceI'veevergotisfrommymother.Shesaid,"justdoit".Andithashelpedmealot.
Iusedtobelazyandnotsuccessfulatschool(高分句型).Ifeltreallyupsetbutdidn'tknowwhattodo.Icametomymumforhelp.Sherepliedinsimplewords:"Don'tthinkaboutit.Justdoit!"Thissimpleadvicedoesmealotofgood.AlthoughnowI'mstillbusywithmyschoolwork,Idon'tfeelworriedanymore(高分句型)..Thesedays,Igetupearlyandworkmuchharderatschool.Ilearntodothingsonebyone.Anditreallymakesmylifeeasier.
Thankstomymom.Heradvicehelpsmegothroughupsanddowns.Don'tthinkaboutit,justdoit!.
分析 重点短语:
1.think about 考虑
2.be busy with忙于
3.go through ups and downs经历风风雨雨
高分句型:
1.I used to be lazy and not successful at school.过去,我在学校里很懒,学业上不成功.(used to 过去常常)
2.Although now I'm still busy with my schoolwork,I don't feel worried anymore.虽然我现在仍然忙于我的功课,但是我再也不感到焦虑了.(although"虽然;尽管"引导让步状语从句)
解答 The best advice I've ever got is from my mother.She said,"just do it".And it has helped me a lot.(描述这条建议)
I used to be lazy and not successful at school(高分句型).I felt really upset but didn't know what to do.I came to my mum for help.She replied in simple words:"Don't think about it.Just do it!"This simple advice does me a lot of good.Although now I'm still busy with my schoolwork,I don't feel worried anymore(高分句型)..These days,I get up early and work much harder at school.I learn to do things one by one.And it really makes my life easier.(所采取的行动)
Thanks to my mom.Her advice helps me go through ups and downs.Don't think about it,just do it!(收获与体会)
点评 解答这种题目时,我们应该仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点. 要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯. 在平常的学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,让文章更出彩.
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