题目内容
11.In 60to 120words,write about the topic"Meeting a special friend for the first time".( 以"与一个特殊朋友的第一次相见"为题,写一篇60-120个词的短文,标点符号不占格)The following are for reference only.(以下问题仅供参考)
•When and where did you meet the friend for the first time?
•Why do you think the friend is special?
•What made your first meeting so impressive/unforgettable?
•How are you getting along with each other?
Meeting a special friend for the first time
I have made many friends during my middle school life.However,there is one who is the most special to me.We only met once.
All the students were asked to do an experiment in groups at the middle school entrance exam.Peter and I were in the same group.Since I wanted our group to bethe first to finish the experiment,I did every step hurriedly and didn't care what Peter said.Finally,I failed and felt very disappointed.At that moment,Peter encouraged me to stay calm and relax.He showed me how to do the experiment patiently,step by step,we made it at last.We still keep in touch with each other by QQ.Now I will never forget him who is a patient and special friend..
分析 高分句型一:However,there is one who is the most special to me然而,有一个朋友对我来说是最特别的.这是一个由who引导的定语从句,先行词是one,在定语从句中充当主语,不可以省略.
高分句型二:All the students were asked to do an experiment in groups at the middle school entrance exam所有的学生都被要求在中学入学考试中分组进行实验.这是一个一般过去时的被动语态的句子,其结构是was/were+及物动词的过去分词.
解答 Meeting a special friend for the first time
I have made many friends during my middle school life.However,there is one who is the most special to me.(高分句型一)We only met once.
All the students were asked to do an experiment in groups at the middle school entrance exam.(高分句型二)(时间和地点)Peter and I were in the same group.Since I wanted our group to be the first to finish the experiment,I did every step hurriedly and didn't care what Peter said.Finally,I failed and felt very disappointed.At that moment,Peter encouraged me to stay calm and relax.He showed me how to do the experiment patiently,step by step,we made it at last.(特殊之处)We still keep in touch with each other by QQ.Now I will never forget him who is a patient and special friend.(相处的方式及情况)
点评 (1)句型多样化,不要I(We)…到底,使人觉得乏味.(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句.(3)进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句.(4)适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词.(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感.
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